Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Falker Hemmingway Style paper

Daniel Truong
Super Gallagher
English 12 CP, Period 6
24 November 2008

Faulker hemmyway dialogue
I

The American and the girl sat with him at a table in (Hemingway 120) the house filled with dust, moldy with age and lack of sunlight. Her voice was dry and cold (Faulkner 114),
“I want some poison” she said, (Faulkner 112)
“let’s drink beer” (Hemingway 120)
“Big ones?” a woman asked from the doorway. (Hemingway 120)
“I want the best you have. I don’t care what kind” (Faulkner 110)
When she entered – a small, fat woman in black, with a thin gold chain descending to her waist and vanishing into her belt, leaning on an ebony cane with a tarnished gold head. (Faulkner 109)
The girl did not say anything (Hemingway 121) for a long while we just stood there, looking.(Faulkner 115)
“its pretty hot,” the man said (Hemingway 120)
“we want two Anis del Toro.” (Hemingway 120)
“you want them with water?” asked the woman
“yes, with water” (Hemingway 120)
We were a little disappointed that (Faulkner 113) it tastes like licorice. (Hemingway 120)
The woman bought (Hemingway 120) a note on paper of an archaic shape, in a thing flowing calligraphy in faded ink.(Faulkner 109) with a twenty five cent (Faulkner 114) tax notice (Faulkner 109)
The woman come out of the bar (Hemingway 120)
“The train comes in five minutes” she said “What did she say?” asked the girl
“That the train is coming in five minutes.”
The girl smiled brightly at the woman, to thank her.
“I’d better take the bags over to the other side of the station,” the man said. (Hemingway 123)
“I’m sure that wont be necessary,” (Faulkner 110) She smiled at him (Hemingway 123)
“But what will you have me do about it, madam?” he said (Faulkner 110)

“I don’t care anything about it.” (Hemingway 123)
“Do you feel better?” he asked
I feel fine,” she said. “there’s noting wrong with me. I feel fine.”

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